First Ever Multiplayer Expedition

Ok to start out my storyline I guess i should start out with my most recent one which is my first multiplayer mining expedition.

Ok it all started when i was just working with some friends on a great server called Imdeity Kingdoms in the town of Sparta(Dont Ask) and a guy named Heavensgate asked if anyone wanted to go mining with him so a few people including me went to the mining world. We went far from the area where most players mine and we started randomly digging a tunnel and we made a small system of tunnels and found a few treasures like iron, gold, and lapis lazuli. Then other people from the town came with more torches, food, and spare tools so we kept digging until we found a large cavern and we found some diamonds near a lava stream. A few people left and me and two other people kept mining until one of them died from falling in lava so me and the other person  split up and i found redstone and iron and the expedition ended there. Tell me your thoughts on this